A Fire's Blaze. *Needs Advice.*

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    Hey! So a good friend of mine challenged me to write an original love story, and I've been working on it for two days now. I'm trying to prove a point to this girl that I can actually finish something that I've started. So, without further explanation, can you please read what I have so far and give me advice on how to improve it? Thanks a million.

    A Fire's Blaze.

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